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Tuesday, February 21, 2017

I Remember...

Tuesday 7th February
I Remember...
Jumping on a rocking boat.
Being attached to a tight rope of elastic.
It took off in the air like a flying albatross.
Gazing above the air looking at the shiny glossy sea.
The hot sticky sweat sticking on my hot clothes.
Pulled down from a long strip of string.
Dragged down in the freezing ice cold water from a thick string of rope.
lifted back up and pulled back down on the rocking  boat.
That was summer

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I was Learning to notice but use the structure used in the exemplar in my piece of  writing. I write about my summer writing.
After writing something that was is happening
You should put descriptive.