Thursday, November 9, 2017

Check Out My Plastic Writing It Will Give Some Cool Ideas...

Wednesday 18 October
WALT: Use the correct structure in a persuasive text.   
  Ellipsis, Question marks
Should We Have Plastic Bags In Supermarkets?

In my opinion both of plastic bags and paper bags  are a disgraceful waste because it's a waste of money and of course you think that plastic bags are wonderful. Already Countdown and New World is already charging for plastic bags.

Firstly, the Animals can get killed easily because they think that plastic bags are food like jellyfish but they're not and the plastic bags can strangle animals to death. We need to keep our country's plastic bag free. What do you guys think about plastic bags?

Secondly, the Plastic can pollute the ocean and when people want to go and get some  fresh water from the ocean,  kinda can’t because the ocean is filled with all sorts of thing. That’s why we need to stop this. Do you think  we should take away plastic bags? Well, I think we should...

Thirdly, Burning plastic is bad for the ozone layer. It can also cause cancer and raise water level. It can harm birds by the birds eating plastic bags, also because every single day sea creatures die because they eat plastic bags

Lastly, Imagine you eat a plastic bag how would you feel? Well first you would not be able to breathe, the plastic bag will get stuck in your lungs and you can’t get it out then you will die.

The End!

In the beginning of term 4  in Te Ngahere we did some persuasive writing about should we have plastic bags in supermarkets. Our WALT: was use the correct persuasive structure in our writing. The things that I think I done well was using the correct structure in persuasive, Ellipsis, Question marks. The things that I needed to work on was trying to make my writing make sense.

Thursday, November 2, 2017

Check out My Visle Mihi...

During the week we have been learning to understand our morning mihi. The reason why I chose these  images is because it reflects on what the English part of the mihi means. The reason on why I chose these images is because they remind me about what's coming next. The pictures remind me of what it says in the mihi. Our WALT was WALT: Understand the mihi. Here is my visual mihi.

Check out my writing goals...

Last week in Te Ngahere, we created a google drawing of our Writing Goals. Our WALT was to Identify our next learning goals in writing. The reason why I choose these goals is because I didn't really know what they meant also What I want to achieve is R5 and move to R6 in writing.

Wednesday, October 25, 2017

Check Out My Term 4 Maths Goals...

Last week in Te Ngahere we made our maths goals google drawing. We had to pick three goals that we wanted to learn. My maths goals are Read and order any number up to 100,000, Reversibility 403-97 97 + ?403 and standard written form for subtraction. I selected them on the ICAN sheet stage 6. I chose these goals because I don’t know what they mean.

Thursday, September 28, 2017

Check Out My William Pike Google Drawing...

Last week in Te Ngahere we watched a webinar about William Pike. Then we have to make a google drawing about him. We learnt a lot about him. He learnt lots about climbing up Mt Ruapehu.

Tuesday, September 19, 2017

Check Out My Awesome Slide Show But Sorry Because I haven't finished...

Last week in my reading group we read a story called Give Me Your Lunch. It is all about these three little girls that are bullies and their names are Nina,Bettina and Kartina and they be mean to another girl and her name was Moona, but the girl who was getting bullied didn't even care.
WALT:Use a range of strategies to answer comprehension questions.
Here is my slide presentation.

Tuesday, September 12, 2017

Check Out My Four Shot Movie Plan...

For a week or so In Te Ngahere we have been doing four shot movie. We were in groups my group was Ngahuia, Sharnee, Cilla and I. (WALT: Understand the vocabulary of filmmaking). Our for shot movie is about Kapa Haka.